Ordinary level 2026 South West mock Professional English Language 2
Ordinary level 2026 South West mock Professional English Language 2
Here is the extracted text from the fifth image, which focuses on an editing section containing a paragraph and a list of sentences with grammatical errors.
SECTION 2: EDITING (15 MARKS)
EITHER
Read the paragraph below carefully and identify the mistakes. Correct tenses, subject-verb agreement, articles, prepositions, spelling, punctuation, wrong word choice, redundancy, and sentence structure. Rewrite the paragraph neatly.
E-Commerce Opportunities for Technical Students
Last year the growth of e-commerce have created new oportunities for industrial and commercial student in Cameroon. Many young peoples in technical school is combining their practical skill with online platform to create product and reach customer direct. Industrial students produce items like furniture, electronics and solar powered gadget. These innovation often start in school workshop where students apply there skills in carpentry electricity and mechanics. Commercial students manage sales, design marketing strategy, and keep record of customer order. Accounting student calculates production cost, while secretarial student handle correspondence and digital communication. Despite these opportunities challenge exists. Some students spend more time on social medias then promoting their work, and financial constraint limit production of quality goods.
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Editing sentences (15 sentences, 30 mistakes)
Read the sentences below carefully and identify the mistakes. Correct tenses, subject-verb agreement, articles, prepositions, spelling, punctuation, wrong word choice, redundancy, and sentence structure. Rewrite them in your answer sheet neatly.
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The student dont understand the instructions from teacher.
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He has forget to bring his tool to the workshop.
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The machines was noisy and dusty yesterday.
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Each electrical student are required to wear safety boot.
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The carpentry tools needs to be arranged properly in the shelf.
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Some students works careless when handling chemicals.
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The teacher warn the students about the risks of electricity.
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Many students dont finishes their practical assignments on time.
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The computer in the workshop is also not function properly.
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One student drop a wrench and it almost hits another student.
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Accounting student calculate the cost of production wrong.
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Marketing student design posters which is not attractive.
(Note: The image cuts off after sentence 12, but indicates a total of 15 sentences.)
Since you’ve been digitizing these exam sections, would you like me to provide the corrected versions of this paragraph and the sentences for your answer key?
